Saturday 21 September 2013

The Return of Ebon Lupus

Here he comes, my Elven Lord
Striding through the mist,
Head held high, proud and strong
The Lord of all the Sidhe.

There was a time, not long ago,
When things were not as this,
When Ebon lived beyond the Vale
In cities made for men.

Born a Sidhe in times long past, 
His youth was spent in Elven lands,
But then a Portal he did find
And the quest for knowledge pulled him through.

For many years in many lands
To return, in vain he tried.
My Magick means and hidden ways,
He sought to travel home.

Finally, one Hallow's Eve, 
When the veil between was thin,
His lonely cry was heard at last,
The Portal brought him home.

Now laughter rings throughout the Vale,
As Ebon tunes his pipes,
Forgotten music heard once more,
The Lord of the Sidhe is home.

Copyright Sue McCaskill - 1990

Tuesday 17 September 2013

Chapter One, Revised

This is chapter one of Penelope Parker. All writing on this blog is copyright Sue McCaskill.


Penelope Parker sighed. It had turned out to be another one of those days at the school she went to. Things always seemed to happen around Penelope, especially when she was upset. There was the time Dexter Bigglesworth had called her ‘four-eyes’ because she wore glasses. Next thing you know, Dexter has four eyes in his face. Or the time her teacher, Miss Nettlethorpe scolded her for daydreaming, and then suddenly found herself floating near the ceiling. Then there was today. The biggest catastrophe of all. That horrible Cornelia Thistlethwaite had been bullying Penelope again, calling her all kinds of names. The last straw came as Cornelia danced around singing, “Penny Parker has no dad, B-A-S-T…” Penelope was stunned, then furious, and she felt her anger boiling over. Shaking, she pointed her finger at Cornelia and shouted, “Zip it up!”
There was a ‘snap’, a ‘fizzle’, a flash, then dead silence. Except for the gurgles coming from Cornelia’s throat. All she could do was gurgle, because where her mouth used to be was a large metal zip! Everyone gasped, and of course, it was at this very moment that Miss Nettlethorpe strode into the room. Taking one look, she turned, pointed at Penelope and said, “Headmistress. Now.” Choking back tears, Penelope bolted from the room, running down the hall and up the stairs to Miss Penlington’s office. Her heart was breaking, because she knew how upset her mum would be, but Cornelia had insulted her mum by saying Penelope didn’t have a father.
When the headmistress saw who it was, and heard what had happened from Miss Nettlethorpe, she picked up the phone and informed her mother that that kind of behaviour was absolutely frowned upon. She also suggested that perhaps Penelope would be better off going elsewhere for her education.
Miserably, Penelope waited for her mum to come and get her, feeling awful inside for what she had done. As her mum came up the stairs, she ran to her and buried her head in her mum’s side. “Oh, mum, I’m so sorry, but Cornelia said I was a bast…”
“Shush, Penelope; repeating a word like that does no good. I know you didn’t mean to do it, but we will have to do something about this.”
She turned as Miss Penlington stalked out of her office, nose in the air. “Mrs. Parker, this is absolutely the breaking point. We cannot have these kinds of incidents at Urban Road. As of now, Penelope is expelled.” With that, she turned, marched into her office, and slammed the door.
“Well,” said her mother. “I guess that is that.” Let’s go home and see what we can do. I must get in touch with your father at once.”
“But I thought you didn’t know where he was?”
“I don’t, but he left a way to contact him in an emergency, and I think this qualifies as one.”
Penelope didn’t know it yet, but she was very unusual, because her mum was mundane, no powers at all. But her dad? That was another matter altogether. He was a very powerful Wizard, and it seemed Penelope had inherited his powers. Because she was a girl, that made her a Witch, and a very powerful one at that. Problem was, she was completely untrained, so these odd things kept happening around her. Penelope’s mum was a good and loving mother, but had no idea what to do about Penelope’s ‘problem’. Penelope’s father was a Wizard of some renown, but had gone off to fight evil or some such thing when Penelope was five. That had left Penelope’s mother in quite a quandary now that Penelope was showing unmistakable signs of inheriting her father’s powers. Her mother had no idea if she could reach her husband, although he was diligent in sending her money and the wherewithal for her and Penelope to live comfortably.
As soon as they got home, she sent Penelope to get cleaned up, and have something to eat, while she tried to contact her husband. Going into his study, she closed and locked the door. She had never had to do this before, and she was very nervous, as it involved a kind of magic.
She unlocked a little chest that was sitting on the desk, and opened it to reveal a crystal. Carefully, she picked it up and held it close, thinking of Penelope’s dad, and the urgency with which she needed to contact him. Almost immediately, the crystal clouded and then cleared, revealing her husband.
“Whatever is wrong, Eleanor? Is Penelope all right?”
“No, and that’s why I’m contacting you. There was another unpleasant incident at her school today, and she was expelled. I don’t know what to do!”
“We knew this might happen sooner or later, and now it’s time for you to take her to Matilda; she is the only one who can help.”
“But, Gwyddion, it will mean I must leave her there. I don’t know if I’m strong enough to do that. She’s our only child!”
“I know it will be hard, but we must do what’s right for Penelope, hard as it may be. And you will get to see her during school breaks.”
“Very well, Gwyddion, I will call Matilda immediately. I do wish you could come home!’
“I know, darling, but it’s impossible right now; you know that. I love you.”
With that, the crystal went blank, and Eleanor was left with tears in her eyes staring at the blank crystal and wishing things were back to normal. Straightening her shoulders, she placed the crystal back in its box and picked up the phone.
Hanging up the phone, she went into the kitchen and found Penelope trying to make pancakes for dinner. Laughing in spite of herself, she hugged her daughter, and showed her the right way to make them.
After pancakes with raspberries and syrup, Eleanor said to Penelope, “How about a nice bubble bath and an early night? Things will look better in the morning after a good night’s sleep.”
“Maybe you’re right, mum. They couldn’t look much worse.”
“Chin up, sweetheart. We’ll get through this. Always remember, no matter what, your father and I will always love you!”
“I love you too, mum,” said Penelope, feeling a little better. “A bubble bath sounds nice. Can I use some of your lavender stuff?”
“Of course, darling. Come on. You get your pyjamas, and I’ll run the bath for you.”

Penelope soaked in the fragrant bath until her fingers and toes were wrinkled, then quickly dried off, got into her pyjamas, and jumped into bed. In spite of the turmoil in her mind, she felt her eyelids gradually closing, and fell fast asleep, burying her head under the covers.

Monday 16 September 2013

My Favourite Machiavelli

The person who impacted me the most in regard to my writing was my grade five elementary school teacher, Mr. Seale. I absolutely adored him. He was handsome, had a wicked sense of humour, and best of all, he was British. At that time, I had been in Canada perhaps two years, and I still missed England terribly. I felt like a square peg in a round hole. I dressed differently, and most importantly of all, at least to me, I spoke differently, a trait that other children were quick to make fun of. Mr. Seale, on the other hand, treated me as an intelligent child who had a valuable contribution to make to the class.

I must say I tried his patience daily! I acted up, talking in class, throwing things at other students, and just being a general nuisance. Mr. Seale, though, soon found my weakness; it was writing stories. Whenever I thought I could get away with it, I would write furtively in my special notebook. I wrote mystery stories similar to those of Enid Blyton, whose Famous Five series I loved. I don’t know how many times I got caught doing this in class, and Mr. Seale devised a perfectly delicious punishment. He would give me an after-school detention of one hour, and during that time, I was to do nothing but write. I was in Heaven!
He took to referring to me as “the naughty one”, which I secretly loved, but publicly made a fuss about. He also expanded my “punishment” by making me read my stories aloud to the class. At first, I was terrified, and the students were cruel in their taunts and criticisms of my work, but ever so slowly, that changed. It got to the point where they demanded more, and Mr. Seale had me read one chapter a day.

During that school year, I grew as a person and gained more confidence in my ability as a writer. As a side effect of my “punishment”, not only did my writing skills improve, I became a better student overall. I did not feel the need to act up any longer and disrupt the class. Mr. Seale still called me the “naughty one”, but it was kind of a joke between us.

That year, there was also a contest for all the students at the school, and joy of joys, it was a writing contest! We could write about anything we chose; it could be fiction or non-fiction, whith a minimum of 500 words. I was overjoyed until Mr. Seale said I had to come up with something new; I couldn’t do what I had already done. My heart sank, because I had run out of ideas, but Mr. Seale told me that all writers have that problem sometimes, and there was a name for it; Writer’s Block. I capitalize the phrase because it seemed so huge and insurmountable. I would put pen to paper, but nothing happened. Nothing.

It was then I learned never to give up. Mr. Seale played word games with me, and in doing so, the block slowly disintegrated. By making word associations, and branching off from each one, I got an idea for my story. I didn’t win, but I came in third, which thrilled me no end, because I got a little trophy and a badge that said “Writer” on it.

Without Mr. Seale’s help and patience, I don’t think I would have developed such a love for the English language. He also taught me to trust in myself and have confidence in my own abilities, even when others were cruel or unkind. When he signed my autograph book at the end of the year, he wrote; “To Susan Neri, the Naughty One.” I treasured that autograph for years, and looking back Mr. Seale was, in a way, a sort of Machiavelli, albeit a benevolent Machiavelli, and I owe him so much for the person I am today.

©Sue McCaskill, July 22, 2009

Sunday 15 September 2013

Aspects



Aspects

Lovely Goddess of the Moon
Maiden, Mother, and Crone
Silver One of the starry skies
Queen of Night

Fertile Mother of the Earth
Golden apples on the bough
Lover of the Horned One
Giver of Life

Ancient Crone of darkest night
Barren of life and love
Wrapped in the mantle of the Earth
Death before Rebirth


Sue McCaskill-©1990

A Poem Written Long Ago

For Himself

Long ago and far away,
I walked the Elven lands.
By babbling brooks and forests green,
I spent my younger years.

But then one dark and dreary day
My dream was snatched away.
I was sent to hostile lands
Far from my faery home.

And since that day without respite
Have I tried to travel back.
Time and again I’ve tried and failed
Year by year my grief has grown.

Now again, the time has come
To try the Portal yet once more.
If yearning makes the Power grow,
I shall return this time.

My roots are in the Land of Sidhe,
There they shall remain,
Until the Portal opens wide
To take me back again.

Written for Lord Ebon, © October 12, 1990, Sue McCaskill




Thursday 12 September 2013

Synopsis

Here is a short synopsis of a story I've been working on for the better  part of ten years, off and on. I'm really feeling the pull to sit and finally finish it. At least before I'm 70! The story is geared to boys and girls between 9 and 12, although I think it will appeal more to girls, as the protagonist is female. The story is set in scenic Wales.

Penelope Parker is ten years old, and is what kids today would call "nerdy". She loves to read, is smart in school. She is a pretty child with flyaway red hair, freckles, and she wears glasses. Of course, she gets teased and called "four eyes" and "teacher's pet" among other things. And, oh yes, she has a beloved cat, Hecate, that she confides all her troubles to. Hecate is a very different cat, but you will discover that when you read the book!


Penelope Parker sighed. It had turned out to be another one of those days at the school she went to. Things always seemed to happen around Penelope, especially when she was upset. There was the time Dexter Bigglesworth had called her ‘four-eyes’ because she wore glasses, and  next thing you know, Dexter has four eyes in his face. Or the time her teacher, Miss Nettlethorpe scolded her for daydreaming, and then suddenly found herself floating near the ceiling. Then there was today. The biggest catastrophe of all. That horrible Cornelia Thistlethwaite had been bullying Penelope again, calling her all kinds of names. The last straw came as Cornelia danced around singing, “Penny Parker has no dad, B-A-S-T-” Penelope was stunned, then furious, and she felt her anger boiling over. Shaking, she pointed her finger at Cornelia and shouted, “Zip it up!”

There was a ‘snap’, a ‘fizzle’, a flash, then dead silence, except for the gurgles coming from Cornelia’s throat. All she could do was gurgle, because where her mouth used to be was a large metal zip! Everyone gasped, and of course, it was at this very moment that Miss Nettlethorpe strode into the room


From that time on, Penelope's life was never to be the same. Follow her adventures and the scrapes she and Hecate get into, and the danger just around the corner.


Excerpt from Penelope Parker

Another short excerpt. Be aware, this is the first draft, so there may be errors!


“Can I take Hecate with me, mum? Please?” Hecate was Penelope’s beloved cat. Not much to look at, (but don’t tell her that!), she had one bent ear and one ear that looked like it had been chewed by a rat. Her eyes were slightly crossed, one was green and the other a startling sapphire blue. But Penelope loved her with all her heart. The cat always listened to her woes, and curled up next to her at night, purring softly.
Looking at her daughter’s pleading eyes, her mother didn’t have the heart to say no. Heaven knew her daughter’s life hadn’t been easy this far, and it was about to get even more difficult. When Penelope was born, her mother, although she loved her husband greatly, hoped that Penelope would be “normal”.  This hope was dashed the first time she went into the nursery and saw Penelope’s toys dancing in the air above her cradle. After her husband left, she tried valiantly to ensure that Penelope’s life was as a child’s life should be. She knew, now, that was no longer possible, so she had made the decision to write Matilda.
“All right, Penelope, you can take her. But hurry up and find her cage and get your things packed. It’s getting late.” Her heart much lighter, Penelope skipped off to do as her mother had asked.
“You know I hate confined spaces,” came a plaintive voice at her feet. Oh, yes, Hecate talked to Penelope all the time. It was another one of those things that Penelope didn’t tell her mother.
“Oh, Hec, I’m sorry! I know you don’t like it, but do you want to have to stay with Mrs. Lomax again?”
“Phfftt!” came the reply. “Absolutely not! She tries to feed me crickets, of all things! Crickets! What cat in her right mind would eat crickets?” Penelope laughed as she hugged Hecate. “Look, you be good, and I’ll see you get some sardines when we get to Aunt Matilda’s.”
“Well,” sniffed Hecate, “well, I suppose in that case, I can put up with the cage for a few hours.”
“Good girl,” said Penelope, as she finished the last of her packing.
“Hurry up, Penelope!” came her mother’s voice from downstairs. “The taxi should be here any minute.”
“Coming, mum. I’m just putting Hec in her cage."

Images from Book

These photos show how I picture the various parts of P.A.W.S. These buildings are actually in Betws-y-Coed in Wales.

This is how I picture the school


The individual dormitories the girls live in during the school term

Aunt Matilda's house


Thoughts About The Level of Reading in My Book

Been doing some research, and have decided that the book I'm writing falls into the Young Adult category. While parts of it will appeal to 9-10 year olds, the majority will appeal to those 12 and older. Some of my critique partners think I talk above my readers, but I don`t believe in "dumbing down" a book. If kids don`t understand a particular word, they will ask an adult, or look it up in the dictionary. The goal of my books is to stretch the reader, both in understanding and imagination. Isn't that what books are all about?

A Short Excerpt



Penelope Parker sighed. It had turned out to be another one of those days at school. Things always seemed to happen around Penelope, especially when she was upset. There was the time Dexter Bigglesworth had called her ‘four-eyes’because she wore glasses. Next thing you know, Dexter has four eyes in his face. Or the time her teacher, Miss Nettlethorpe scolded her for daydreaming, and then suddenly found herself floating near the ceiling.
Penelope wasn’t a bad girl, just a very confused one. All these things were happening around her, and she couldn’t control them.
Penelope didn’t know it yet, but she was very unusual, because her mum was mundane, no powers at all. But her dad? That was another matter altogether. He was a very powerful Wizard, and it seemed Penelope had inherited his powers. Because she was a girl, that made her a Witch, and a very powerful one at that. Problem was, she was completely untrained, so these odd things kept happening around her. Penelope’s mother was at her wit’s end after this latest fiasco with Dexter Bigglesworth and Miss Nettlethorpe.  The headmistress, Miss Penlington, had called her mother to the school, and informed her that that kind of behaviour was absolutely frowned upon. She also suggested that perhaps Penelope would be better off going elsewhere for her education.

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